Monday, September 15, 2014

Production Punctuation

Production - Punctuation
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WALT: understand and use a range of punctuation, including full stops, capital letters, commas, exclamation marks, question marks and speech marks.

Read the paragraph in box one, then in box two add in the right punctuation.
Hints: Full stops:   capital letters:  commas:  exclamation marks:  question marks:  speech marks:  apostrophes:

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the production we are doing this year is called journey through the legends  miss hill wrote the script and we are all acting and singing in it  we are awesome our part in the production is the legend called how maui fished up aotearoa  we have two different mauis hugh and jared  however they are very versatile and they can fill in for the brothers too
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The production we are doing this year is called “Journey Through The Legends”. Miss Hill wrote the script and we are all acting and singing in it, we are awesome. Our part in the production is the legend called how Maui fished up Aotearoa. We have two different Maui’s Hugh and Jared, however they are very versatile and they can fill in for the brothers too.

Early finishers: Take a screenshot of both paragraphs, then post to your blog with a few sentences explaining your learning.

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