Fictitious writing

CHARACTER WRITING

WALT describe a character

I must remember to:  SHOW NOT TELL!

Introduction - who and where

First Paragraph - what she looks like

Second Paragraph - her characteristics

Third Paragraph - her actions

Conclusion - action and observation

Begin your writing here:                      Olaf

As he comes alive by queen Elsa (not knowing he can talk), he wonders what to do as a single and lonely white  snowman  without a nose.   While he strides through the snow he might be lonely but he is still filled with happiness and laughter.  Even though he is a snowman  he always wanted to live in the summer and he even made a small song for it.  

This joyful snowman has now got a bright orange nose, long bumpy brown arms, big black eyes with pitch dark eyebrows.  On his body he has three black rough buttons with tiny cube shaped feet. As  this snowman's  hair, it is very messy  and it looks like a bunch of branches poking out if his head. Olaf’s body can break apart into three pieces and then reattach again.

Olaf is a snowman he loves to sing and dance. When  he dances  he  gets a hat on, finds a stick then starts wiggling and jiggling while feeling the beat.  As a snowman Olaf is very talkative, he talks and talks and talks the finally he finishes talking.

Olaf likes to stride through the snow plus he  talks a lot and I mean a lot. Everyone who knows Olaf knows how he is very  cheerful and excitement.  Olaf likes to waddle like a penguin and sometimes talk fast.