I heard splashes and screaming from every direction. I heard laughter and chatter from the back. I saw right in front of me everything in 3d. I saw rocks and buildings and nature just beautiful! I felt water spraying and wind blowing. I felt like I was going to twirl over board. I wondered could I ever do this again? I wondered would my brother and sister like this fun adventure to?
LOVE! the start off your story it starts of with Action great work!!!
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